Gaara
Academy Student
Sharingan
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Post by Gaara on Jan 27, 2007 20:25:10 GMT -5
Name: Zane Noharu
Age: 16
Gender: Male
Rank: Chunin
Weapons: His weapons preferred are a demon wind shuriken that is concealed in his scroll. He also uses kunai and a extensive amount of wire and thread for traps and attacking. He is strategic with his weapons since he uses his living shadow technique to a large amount of times. His weapons are able to conceal his shadow and make them use surprise attacks.
Appearance: Zane has sleek and long hair that grows to rest on his shoulder’s tops and is trimmed at the back so it won’t go no further past his neck. The colors are mixtures of white and a light blue. He has blue eyes that shift to a black when his blood limit activates. (Kekki Genkai details below.) Zane wears a white jacket of denim that is the same as his white to match the colors pants. When his jacket is unzipped and open. It barely shows the black short sleeve shirt under it. His sandals are white as well and on the back of his jacket and on the top part of his shoes lays his family’s symbol which mostly represents a yin and yang sign eclipsing or overlapping. Lastly, he stands to be a 5’10 in height and then his weight is a 143 lbs. (His facial appearance is in greater detail in signature picture.)
Personality:Zane is considered the quiet one among a group. People think he is shy, but really he is rather dense and can’t keep a conversation at the most when it comes to him speaking or being spoke to. He prefers to be the one alone and calming his mind through training exercises, or simply meditating and remaining still. Although it isn’t like him to just sit around, he is always scheduled and thinking ahead. He plans his free time for missions so he can be able to do his part to help others. His smile only defines who he is, another gentle person someone can depend on.
Zane is often closed about his past endeavors, probably because he doesn’t want to show what is dear making it revealed that this may be the only fear that wipes his smiles and smirks from his face. It is pretty clear that friendship, honor, and generosity are things that he believe in and become his downfall as a ninja, even though he is considered a genius in combat.
In situations such as missions and fights, Zane stays calm and collected. He keeps his mind open so he could think steps ahead of his opponent and also plan out possibilities and bad ideas that he would avoid. He reacts to endangered allies with sheer care as he would even stray form his plans to save them. Just as his friends and honor are his weakness out side of battle, so they are inside battle. He is no different no matter situations. He is just the same Zane who shows positivism to keep calm.
Village of Origin: Twilight Village (Now resides as part of Konohaqakure No Satu.)
Kekkei Genkai/Special Ability/Bloodlimit:Blood Limit/Kekkei Genkai/Special Abilities: The Rerundus is known as the eye of truth, because it foresees traps and makes the user unaffected by Genjutsu. This keen eyesight is the trait of the Twilight Village due to the mixed bloodlines of the Dark Village and Light Village even though they have a rivalry. Those who use the Rerundus would focus they’re eye sight to the point where they’re cornea is surrounded by Yin and Yang symbol haves that would surround the eye to give it the pattern of a type of exotic flower in their eyes. This is usually intimidating because of the alien like ability. The Xenoharu clan was the first to inherit this trait since they’re children were the first born through the unity of the villages and the formation of the Twilight Village. Therefore, the ability is rightfully theirs, even though other families of the Twilight Village have also managed to develop this ability, but they seemed to be of children and offspring of Xenoharu clan, so it still is technically their trait.
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Gaara
Academy Student
Sharingan
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Post by Gaara on Jan 27, 2007 20:30:41 GMT -5
Jutsus:
Name: [Serpant Strike] Rank: B Type: Taijutsu Desc: Zane’s basic fighting style. Zane uses his chakra to convert it into a purple color as seen when it clusters and builds up into his hands. He then sets his posture and fingers to stick out for a quick strike from the tips. Strikes that hit the opponent would render their chakra status poisoned. What is meant by this is that when Zane makes a strike, this chakra would sink into the opponent’s chakra network and cause him to lose control of chakra because the corrupt chakra seeps into the chakra points to stun chakra use and often causing intense pain and paralysis sometimes from channeling chakra. Even intense use form expelling chakra and channeling would otherwise cause bruises upon infected internal organs that are close to the point of contact Zane made, so for an example if Zane would strike an opponent’s chest area, them using chakra would irritate the blow and the heart would suffer damage causing fatal internal bleeding. If the opponent stops from channeling chakra for an hour period of time then they would no longer risk anymore damage as the irritated chakra would return to normal. However, when Zane uses this technique and changes his chakra, it seems to take a short period of time to convert his own chakra back to it’s original state to perform jutsu, and also he has the risk of hurting himself as he carries this chakra when in this taijutsu fighting style. Therefore, he can’t rotate from performing this taijutsu to performing ninjutsu without it being life threatening. The more strikes to the opponent, the worse the condition of their chakra becomes.
Name: [Serpent Clutch] Rank: S Type: Taijutsu Desc: Zane’s alteration of the Serpent Strike. Zane uses his high speed Serpant Strikes to attack his opponent’s limbs instantly stunning them. He then starts to double the speed to strike freely at all major vital points and then ends it with a double thrust to the just to exert the last burst that would express the venom chakra effect to all chakra points in the chakra network and cause absolutely no use of chakra. Give the right amount of accuracy to the vital spots, it can kill the opponent.
Name: [Rerundus: Dextrose] Rank: N/A Type: Kekki Genkai Desc: Zane’s primary advantage over Genjutsu and defense against his techniques backfiring. Zane’s Rerundus uses balance to prevent against illusions and allowing him to see within the worst kind of darkness, and through the brightest light. It was often a trait inherited to fight against the rival nations the Dark and Light villages. While it can penetrate genjutsu, it is able to see traps in the area easily since it is used to defy the art of deception. At Zane’s level, (Level 2: Dextrose) he can diffuse higher leveled genjutsu also he is able to use one of his clan’s signature genjutsus, but will cost him more chakra since he doesn’t control the last level Rerundus, unlike his mother.
Name: [Living Shadow] Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Desc: Zane makes his shadow come to the life as it has the option of moving freely around the field by rising from the ground, or even traveling between the shadows. Zane’s shadow will be able to rise form the ground and appear as a copy of him if Zane uses transformation jutsu to disguise it and give it color making a complete copy. When this jutsu is active, Zane can’t cast no shadow. He can multiply this jutsu’s affect to enhance his shadow’s size and shape depending on a concentration of light. He can remained in control of it by constantly transferring chakra to keep it active. It is unable to use jutsu however and when an extreme intense light hits it, it will flee back casting Zane’s shadow again.
Name: [Light Illusion jutsu] Rank: C Type: Genjutsu Desc: One of Zane’s many illusion jutsu. It allows him to circulate his chakra through is body at a fast rate by constantly making the corresponding hand signs. The chakra picks up the light that makes contact with Zane’s eyes as the chakra circulates and after building up enough, Zane makes a quick flash that casts a Genjutsu on their opponent having them see what Zane wants them to just by making him distribute some chakra to trap them in the illusion for the time depending on how much chakra he continues to pour into it to keep them trapped. The opponent will be stunned and in awe as they are trapped in the Genjutsu allowing Zane to make a quick strike or an attack with ninja tools. However, as along as Zane is focusing to keep the illusion up, he is vulnerable from other interference, which means he can’t be distracted or else he will lose control. This jutsu can’t distinguish friend or foe, so allies are affected if they don’t turn their heads away instead of trying to simply shield their eyes from the intensity.
Name: [Crucifix Shadow Rendon] Rank: A Type: Taijutsu Desc:Zane and his living shadow do a chain of combo strikes and grappling take downs that cause severe damage and ends with a barrage of kunai. First Zane attacks using a Venom Strike to the opponent’s haw paralyzing the foe and making him partially airborne. Zane then whips his arm around to snatch his shadow and throw him at the paralyzed helpless foe to grapple him by grabbing under his shoulders or his collar then quickly pulling him so that the attacker’s feet would be on the stomach of the victim as he slams his body down on the ground as they fall to make it bounce up from the impact while the shadow kicks off to remain airborne while he spins around readying for the final strike while Zane shortly follows to snatch the victim and uses another slam take down and sling the victim’s body into the air to be pierced by the barrage of shadow kunai and shuriken that would strike vital points or close to them depending on what condition they are reaching for the target, dead or alive.
Name: [Kawarimi no jutsu] Rank: D Type: Ninjutsu Desc: The user switches their body with a decoy (a rock, plant, animal, etc.). This is used to escape dangerous projectiles or situations. The user can then be able to use a counter attack if acting in good timing.
Name: [Kuchiyose] Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Desc: he user must posses a scroll. Inside of the scroll many weapons are kept and the user is able to summon them when they need it. In this case, it is used to store Zane’s weapons used in most of his jutsus.
Name: [Water Walking] Rank: D Type: Ninjutsu Desc: The user is able to walk on water surfaces. This jutsu constantly uses a continuous balance of chakra at the soles of his feet. This requires a major amount of skill and ability.
Name: [Henge no Jutsu] Rank: C Type: Genjutsu Desc: Transformation Technique used to disguise things, or even the user to alter his or her appearance.
Summon Jutsu:
Name: [Summon Jutsu: Venom Fang Ritual] Rank: A Type: Summoning Desc: A summoning jutsu of the Twilight Village to call upon the wolf family summoning. There are various parts of this summon. The little chakra distributed often summons Pukpin pup, the young mischief son of the summoning, then Tessa the temptress of the summon which only is used as a transportation at the most, but her abilities are of help. Then last of them is the beast king, Vicious who is the strongest and most fearful. These type of summons deal with the emotional Genjutsu practices that lure it’s victims into illusions of misery and sometimes desires. They are intelligent so they are capable of speech and have skills in tracking and hunting since they are wolves by nature.
Pukpin is a small male wolf pup that has gray fur and sits on the head of it’s summoner. It doesn’t do anything really as it is lazy and mischievous. If you get close enough, it might give your opponent a little shock as it would laugh and smile, while it plays on it’s own to use clone jutsu to make it look like more than one of you are attack, but really it is just a prank for your opponent to get ticked off. “Good boy!”
Tessa is a female white wolf who has black tufts of hair near it’s hide that is colored in shape of hearts. She is big enough to ride on as she is as big as any adult which is why she is often obliged to give transportation for her summoner. Tessa’s genjutsu deals with illusions of deep wants and desires as she would glare at your opponent to hypnotize them into a seduced state of thought. The victim would be so deeply in the illusion, they would be most likely be hit by the next attack unless they would escape the genjutsu with a simple release, or Kai dispell. Tessa is much of a charmer and doesn’t cause problems often if given the proper respect.
Vicious is the most feared wolf, he is called the beast king for a reason. He uses a genjutsu by biting his opponent and secreting a poison from his fangs. He then uses the pain to lure his victims into genjutsu involving the victim’s worst fear to make their heart rate speed up to better circulate the poison for an opponent’s death. When he traps others in a genjutsu, he will constantly poke at their fear with taunt and dispiriting logic. Vicious is hard to control and barter with because of his title. He often is too proud to submit to things so asking for his help isn’t easy. He might be more of a threat in battle to both combatants. He is no bigger than Tessa, and his chakra capacity that he holds within himself is large but depletes at a fast rate for his abilities.
Name: [Hopeless Sanctuary] Rank: S Type: Kekki Genkai Desc: Zane uses this jutsu so he can create an illusion world of nothing but darkness. This conceals him and traps his opponent in his illusion. She can then cause the illusions to bare the qualities that would affect the senses often causing the opponent to be affected if they give into it. The more stress that occurs the more trapped they become. They won’t be able to feel the pain or their body being affected as they are stressed, and until they are calm when they stop their chakra, they won’t escape the jutsu easily.
History: Zane is the next generation of his family’s main descendant of the Xenoharu clan. His grandmother and grandfather were the ones who built Twilight Village along with other refugees meaning his one of the rightfully inheritors of the position to be the kage of the village, although he has no interest in it whatsoever.
Zane was trained by his father and supervised by his mother who is blind. His father was the kage of the Village betwixt the Twilight and trained Zane himself so he would be strong enough to live up to his abilities as one of the successors of his clan’s legacy. Zane was pushed to his limits having time for recreation and play with other villagers even though he was only seven years old. His mother would sneak him away from his father’s eyes so that she would show him the affection he lacked by spending time with him by playing games of intellect and even such simple things as tag to Zane’s interest so he wouldn’t become empty and unnerving, even though his training would become as his father would describe it as, corrupt with emotion and lack of duty.
Zane was sent to Leaf Village at the age of nine to participate in academy classes that were given there. Because of Twilight Village being constantly attacked by remnants of the Dark and Light Village, there would be no time for academy training by the Villages elites and experience seeing the village was still developing and had lack of military forces. Zane wasn’t exactly sad about the decision of him leaving nor happy. Reasons were because he would be away from his father who constantly egged him on to the point where he became stress and depressed, but even if he would get away from his father, he would miss the only friend he had when he was in need, his mother.
Zane matured quite well under the training of Leaf Village academy, since he was pushed to the edge and had more endurance from being forced to continue from his father, he would easily overcome some jutsu that were taught and then master them as he was careful of chakra control. His chakra control is great and stamina is as well because Twilight Village jutsu required more chakra to be distributed than most. It is unknown why, but it is said that it is because of the different chakra within Dark and Light villagers for techniques. Since Zane is of both blood, jutsu that are used in combination If both villages disagree needing more distribution of chakra to control it. That is why precise chakra control is one of Zane’s better qualities. As Zane made it to be a Genin at twelve, he took the chunin exams three times since it was held twice a year. He was eligible to be promoted to Chunin all three times accepting the third time and declining the first two times because he would describe it to be a “challenge” and “enjoyed” taking them because he met so many people. It was probably because he knew his mother would want to grow in this positive manner that he continued to take them.
Zane became a chunin at thirteen as he carried out difficult missions. He failed every now and then trying to bite off more than he could chew and to further his stubbornness, he tried to handle the missions alone feeling he had something to prove upon learning shortly after becoming a chunin that his father was now deceased. He then took on another mission this time it required him to go alone, but little did he know, it was a trick by the hokage for him to meet his mother and learn that he should know the value of teamwork and cooperation from no one better than herself. Zane listened to his mother willingly and changed to now cooperate and keep focus on missions that required teams. He now resides in Leaf Village and his mother through an agreement to expand military with their unique abilities that are being lended to the Leaf Village, in exchange, the Leaf Village sees to the attack and imprisonment and possibly genocide of the raging Dark and Light Village remnants.
RP Sample: “Again…” The sound of a gentle feminine voice said over the heavy breathing of the presence before a young woman. The long hair of a young eight year old boy’s sides hung down as his head was lowered from the stress on his body from the constant attempts of his striking technique. His hands was placed on his knees as he was bent over and gasping for air. He swallowed deeply as he tried to rise only to fall to his knees. “Again Zane…” the woman said in her gentle voice. She wore robes of white that seemed to conceal her figure as they were loose with the large sleeves that hung down although her arms and hands were skinny. She reached up to her face removing the single hair from over her eye as it was ironic there was no need to do so. Her eyes were white and showed a faded presence o her pupils only to show that she was blind. The woman step forward with one foot as her sandal crushed the blades of grass under her foot of the garden that stood in the middle of the outside field surrounded by pagodas and walkways. One man stood on the walkway as he watched from the distance, he wore the same robes as he seemed to be of the household as well, only staying to observe his sparring offspring and wife.
The boy lifted his head up quickly whipping the long strands of hair up and rising so that he may be on one knee while in a set position to kick off or lunge forward. His mother came to a stop as her body no longer moved as a reflex to the quick movement. The boy then lunged as he kicked off towards his mother once more and he thrust his figured four fingers together after his feet made contact to the ground to halt his body’s lunge. The woman shifted her weight to the side and leaned as she made him miss and leaned again only to the opposite direction to avoid another quick thrust. As the next thrust came, the boy felt a snag as he felt his thrust came up short, and that the grip of his mother was upon his wrist as he looked to her with his mouth gaping and surprised as his mother’s dull expression remained unchanged.
“Almost…Zane.” She said as she held his wrist. Zane thrust his other hand forward as he tried ot strike while his mother was preoccupied holding that other but his hand was slapped away upon it’s course. His arm then flew back from the sudden deflection as his right side was exposed and his left arm was still being held from the previous attack. Suddenly, he felt the grip of his arm be freed as he started to lose balance. He then felt a thrust as his left shoulder and shifted his eyes to see his mother on the offensive as she stood in a different stance. Her left hand thrust forward as Zane was helpless to block from him still being off-balance as he was hit on the right shoulder and then again at his chest. He then tossed his head forward form the blow to the chest, but it didn’t end as he was then struck at his lower torso and then a palm met hitting him upon his head as he tossed it back. He then felt another palm hit him in the center of his chest as he flew back and landed on his back. “Do not take me lightly as your father because I’m a woman and I’m blind.” Zane heeded his mother’s words thinking it was too late for that advice. He had not sparred with his mother in front of his father’s eyes before. It only proved that he was thinking suspicious of Zane’s behavior lately as he acted more joyous than disciplined which was a flaw to his perfectionist father.
Zane laid on the ground breathing heavily as he laid there. He then coughed a bit from the air leaving his chest from the swift palm strike. “Rise again Zane…” his mother demanded as she looked down at him. His father who was nearby lowered his head as he walked away and placed upon his head the tunic kage hat which only meant he was going to take on his village duties. The ears of the mother listened to the footsteps as they grew faint and then started to subside as the sound of them was no more as the father disappeared down the hall of the south pagoda. The mother’s pale face showed a slight smile as her eyes focused forward and her hands slid up into her sleeves as she folded her arms after concealing them. “Are you alright son?” The mother asked as she lowered her head and closed her eyes.
Zane placed his hands on each side of him on the ground as he pushed himself and staggering to sit up. “Yes…but, did you have to hit so hard mother?” The mother giggled at the question as her face lit up with a cheerful expression. “I’m sorry, but, we had to make it look convincing. Your father would only notice and take you from my care.” Zane then nodded at his mother’s logic. He knew that his mother meant no harm in placing his body under such damage more severe than what his father would have placed it under. He pushed himself off the ground and stood tall as he looked to his mother who approached slowly as her robe dragged against the grass. She then leaned forward as Zane reached his arms out to embrace her and hug her as the child felt her soft robes against his face as she looked down at her son. The mother unfolded her hands and placed them on Zane’s back to hold him as her snuggled his face against her robes.
“Mother…do I have to go to stay at Leaf Village alone?” Zane asked as he looked to his mother. The expression on her face soured and appeared saddened as she closed her eyes to hold back the tears, but one left her eye as it rested on her cheek. “Yes, but Zane, you will be so much stronger, and whatever you do, I want you to make so many friends while doing it. Friends will make you strong to Zane.” The mother’s words perplexed the child as he looked up to her with a puzzled face. “How is that mother?” She giggled and then patted him on the back to leave the question unanswered. “You’ll see Zane, but let’s go play a game in the garden before our father returns.” Zane didn’t look for the answer as his childlike mind was curious to know what game him and his mother would play. “Okay!” he said as he lifted his head to look at his mother and then let go as he jumped up and down excited.
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Post by Uzumaki Naruto on Jan 27, 2007 20:43:41 GMT -5
Before I accept this, you have to apply for your clan and jutsus. After that I will give you a full review.
**Ok this is good now**
ACCEPTED
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